{"product_id":"the-top-10-dialogue-mistakes-writers-make","title":"The Top 10 Dialogue Mistakes Writers Make","description":"\u003cp\u003e\u003cspan style=\"font-size: 16px;\"\u003e\u003cstrong\u003e Learn directly from dynamo team, Producer and Manager Marilyn R. Atlas, who produced \u003cem\u003eEchoes, A Certain Desire, Real Women Have\u003c\/em\u003e \u003cem\u003eCurves \u003c\/em\u003e(HBO) and\u003cem\u003e The Choking Game \u003c\/em\u003e(Lifetime) and her associate Elizabeth Lopez, VP of Literary Development who together have pitched, shaped, and sold 6 books by new novelists, as well as 2 pilots for ABC \u0026amp; ABC Family! \u003c\/strong\u003e\u003c\/span\u003e\u003c\/p\u003e\r\n\u003cp\u003e\u003cspan style=\"font-size: 14px;\"\u003e Filmed entertainment is visual, and though everyone loves a catchy line, it’s really an exceptional exchange framed by a character’s choice of action that we remember. Dialogue is one of the clearest ways of exploring your character’s agenda, frame of mind, and emotional state. The best dialogue is able to do even more (and succinctly, sometimes in just a few lines): It lets us know something about the overall theme of your script, as well as unresolved areas ripe for conflict between your protagonist and the other characters: friend, frenemy, and foe… \u003cbr\u003e\u003c\/span\u003e\u003c\/p\u003e\r\n\u003cp\u003e\u003cspan style=\"font-size: 14px;\"\u003e In this Stage 32 Next Level Webinar, hosts Marilyn Atlas and Elizabeth Lopez will walk you what professional dialogue looks and sounds like. They will then guide you through the top 10 biggest dialogue mistakes they see novices and sometimes even experienced writers make. These can happen when writers are stuffing their scenes with overlong conversations as a way of exhaustively framing the characters’ POVs, or as a misguided bid to amp up tension. Death by rambling monologue or page-long scene description is an unkind thing to wish on a reader!\u003c\/span\u003e\u003c\/p\u003e\r\n\u003cp\u003e\u003cspan style=\"font-size: 14px;\"\u003e\u003cspan style=\"color: #96281b;\"\u003e\u003cstrong\u003eYou will leave the webinar knowing:\u003c\/strong\u003e\u003c\/span\u003e\u003c\/span\u003e\u003c\/p\u003e\r\n\u003cul\u003e\r\n\u003cli\u003e\u003cspan style=\"color: #96281b;\"\u003e\u003cstrong\u003eThe top 10 most common dialogue mistakes writers make.\u003c\/strong\u003e\u003c\/span\u003e\u003c\/li\u003e\r\n\u003cli\u003e\u003cspan style=\"color: #96281b;\"\u003e\u003cstrong\u003eHow to use dialogue to explore your character’s agenda.\u003c\/strong\u003e\u003c\/span\u003e\u003c\/li\u003e\r\n\u003cli\u003e\u003cspan style=\"color: #96281b;\"\u003e\u003cstrong\u003eHow to use dialogue to convey your theme.\u003c\/strong\u003e\u003c\/span\u003e\u003c\/li\u003e\r\n\u003cli\u003e\u003cspan style=\"color: #96281b;\"\u003e\u003cstrong\u003eHow to properly use subtext in your writing.\u003c\/strong\u003e\u003c\/span\u003e\u003c\/li\u003e\r\n\u003cli\u003e\u003cspan style=\"color: #96281b;\"\u003e\u003cstrong\u003eHow to create differentiated, identifiable characters in your script.\u003c\/strong\u003e\u003c\/span\u003e\u003c\/li\u003e\r\n\u003c\/ul\u003e\r\n\u003cp\u003eYour hosts Marilyn R. Atlas and Elizabeth Lopez have a screenwriting guide called \u003cem\u003eDating Your Character\u003c\/em\u003e coming out in the Fall by Stairway Press. Marilyn is a literary\/talent manager who has produced \u003cem\u003eEchoes, A Certain Desire, \u003c\/em\u003eand \u003cem\u003eReal Women Have Curves\u003c\/em\u003e for HBO, and last year’s \u003cem\u003eThe Choking Game\u003c\/em\u003e for Lifetime based on a YA book. Together with her associate Elizabeth, she has pitched, shaped, and sold 6 books by new novelists, including \u003cem\u003eThe Last Ride of Caleb O’Toole, Hungry Woman in Paris, The Ave Maria Bed \u0026amp; Breakfast, On the Move, and Chasing the Jaguar\u003c\/em\u003e. They’ve also sold two mini-series, the \u003cem\u003eUntitled Posse Pilot\u003c\/em\u003e to ABC Family, and \u003cem\u003eThe Fabulous Fernandez Sisters Pilot\u003c\/em\u003e to ABC, among others. Their clients have appeared in shows such as \u003cem\u003eStar Trek, Fringe, Pretty Little Liars, 90210, Revenge, Hart of Dixie, NCIS:LA, True Blood, Dexter, Chuck, Castle, \u003c\/em\u003eand\u003cem\u003e Criminal Minds\u003c\/em\u003e. In addition, her clients have worked on feature films such as \u003cem\u003eHoles\u003c\/em\u003e and \u003cem\u003eTransformers\u003c\/em\u003e. Marilyn herself has been in development on pilots for Showtime and ABC Family.\u003c\/p\u003e\r\n\u003chr\u003e\r\n\u003ch3\u003eWhat You Will Learn:\u003c\/h3\u003e\r\n\u003cp\u003eWe’ll do a few exercises to give you practice putting yourself in the mindset of your character.\u003c\/p\u003e\r\n\u003cul\u003e\r\n\u003cli\u003eIncorporating back story\u003c\/li\u003e\r\n\u003cli\u003eBalancing mood and the reactions caused by the scene itself\u003c\/li\u003e\r\n\u003cli\u003ePrioritizing goals – inner and outer\u003c\/li\u003e\r\n\u003c\/ul\u003e\r\n\u003cp\u003e\u003cbr\u003eOnce you’re warmed up, we’ll focus on subtext, which is what a conversation is really about under the surface. Characters are ostensibly talking about A, but are really dancing around B, and maybe C.\u003c\/p\u003e\r\n\u003cul\u003e\r\n\u003cli\u003eHow to use vague, but emotionally resonant means of expression\u003c\/li\u003e\r\n\u003cli\u003eHow to pay attention to and guide the dramatic beats within the scene\u003c\/li\u003e\r\n\u003cli\u003eHow to button the scene so that it ends on a high or much lower low than how it began…\u003c\/li\u003e\r\n\u003c\/ul\u003e\r\n\u003cp\u003eWe’ll conclude with tips on how to differentiate the way each of your characters sounds and functions, so your script is peopled by clearly identifiable characters with their own goals and attitudes.\u003c\/p\u003e\r\n\u003cul\u003e\r\n\u003cli\u003eYou’ll look at vocabulary, slang, “in the know” words, accents, rhythms\u003c\/li\u003e\r\n\u003cli\u003eYou’ll be aware of how direct\/indirect, how aggressive\/passive each character operates\u003c\/li\u003e\r\n\u003cli\u003eYou’ll make sure that you’re consistent in presenting characters as coming from a habituated practice of learned success\/failure…\u003c\/li\u003e\r\n\u003c\/ul\u003e\r\n\u003cp\u003e\u003cstrong\u003eWe will provide a handout, too, as a helpful takeaway to keep you on track.\u003c\/strong\u003e\u003c\/p\u003e\r\n\u003ch3\u003eWho Should Attend?\u003c\/h3\u003e\r\n\u003cul\u003e\r\n\u003cli\u003eMore advanced writers who have written 2 or more scripts\/plays.\u003c\/li\u003e\r\n\u003cli\u003eWriters who may have been optioned, but not sold.\u003c\/li\u003e\r\n\u003cli\u003eWriters who have demonstrated a dedication to their craft and want to continue to improve, specifically by tethering character dialogue to behavior.\u003c\/li\u003e\r\n\u003cli\u003eWriters who are hoping to attach a particular A-list actor and are writing the lead role expressly for him.\u003c\/li\u003e\r\n\u003cli\u003eAny writer who wants to brush up on their dialogue skills.\u003c\/li\u003e\r\n\u003c\/ul\u003e\r\n\u003chr\u003e\r\n\u003ch3\u003eAbout The Webinar Format:\u003c\/h3\u003e\r\n\u003cp\u003eWebinars take place in Los Angeles time. They are done online using a designated software program from Stage 32. You can participate from the comfort of your own home and you will be able to communicate directly with your instructor during the webinar. If you cannot attend the live webinar, you can still participate! The webinar will be recorded and you will have on-demand access to the audio recording, which you can view as many times as you'd like for a whole year. More information can be found below.\u003c\/p\u003e\r\n\u003ch3\u003eAbout Your Hosts Marilyn Atlas and Elizabeth Lopez:\u003c\/h3\u003e\r\n\u003cp\u003eAn award-winning producer and personal manager of actors and writers, Marilyn R. Atlas is equally at home in the worlds of film, television, and live theater. Among her credits as film producer are \u003cem\u003eReal Women Have Curves\u003c\/em\u003e for HBO, which won the Audience Award at the Sundance Film Festival, \u003cem\u003eA Certain Desire\u003c\/em\u003e, starring Sam Waterston, and \u003cem\u003eEchoes\u003c\/em\u003e, which won the Gold Award at the Texas International Film Festival. In addition to producing a variety of programming for the cable\/ pay TV market, Marilyn served as a production consultant on the film \u003cem\u003eCall Me\u003c\/em\u003e. She was also involved as a producer in the development of the MOW \u003cem\u003eNightwalker\u003c\/em\u003e and \u003cem\u003ePlaying for Keeps.\u003c\/em\u003e\u003c\/p\u003e\r\n\u003cp\u003eHer clients have appeared in shows such as \u003cem\u003eStar Trek, Fringe, Pretty Little Liars, 90210, Revenge, Hart of Dixie, NCIS:LA, True Blood, Dexter, Chuck, Castle, \u003c\/em\u003eand\u003cem\u003e Criminal Minds\u003c\/em\u003e. In addition, her clients have worked on feature films such as \u003cem\u003eHoles\u003c\/em\u003e and \u003cem\u003eTransformers\u003c\/em\u003e. Marilyn herself has been in development on pilots for Showtime and ABC Family.\u003c\/p\u003e\r\n\u003cp\u003eIn live theater, Marilyn co-produced the West Coast premiere of the musical \u003cem\u003eGod Bless You Mr. Rosewater \u003c\/em\u003ebyAshman and Menken (the writers of both \u003cem\u003eEnchanted\u003c\/em\u003e and \u003cem\u003eTangled\u003c\/em\u003e). She also co-produced the award-winning play \u003cem\u003eTo Gillian on Her 37th Birthday\u003c\/em\u003e, which was made into a film starring Michelle Pfeiffer and Peter Gallagher. Her additional credits as a producer in live theater include \u003cem\u003eToday’s Special\u003c\/em\u003e and \u003cem\u003eAs I Sing.\u003c\/em\u003e\u003c\/p\u003e\r\n\u003cp\u003eMarilyn is a member of the National Association of Latino Independent Producers. She has spoken at their Writers’ and Producers’ retreats, the DGA-sponsored LA Asian Film Festival, as well as various other symposia for the Sherman Oaks Experimental College. She is a founding member of Women in Film’s Luminas Committee, which supports the portrayal of women in non-stereotypical roles in film and television. She has spoken at events such as The San Francisco Writers Conference, the Santa Fe Screenwriters Conference and Richard Krevolin’s USC Screenwriting Retreat. Marilyn has also taught several actor workshops. Additionally, she was a guest lecturer in the USC Writing Program, where she also teaches a class every year on creating three-dimensional, non-stereotypical characters. She has spoken at the Texas Bar Association and was a guest lecturer at Whittier Law School.\u003c\/p\u003e\r\n\u003cp\u003eIn addition to Marilyn’s film\/TV credits, she has sold (first time) novels \u003cem\u003eChasing the Jaguar \u003c\/em\u003eto HarperCollins, \u003cem\u003eHungry Woman in Paris\u003c\/em\u003e to Grand Central Publishing, \u003cem\u003eAve Maria Bed \u0026amp; Breakfast\u003c\/em\u003e to Hachette Publishing, and \u003cem\u003eLast Ride of Caleb O’Toole\u003c\/em\u003e to Source Books.\u003c\/p\u003e\r\n\u003cp\u003eRecently, Marilyn has been developing the \u003cem\u003eBrides’ March\u003c\/em\u003e for Lifetime Television as well as a limited television series. She previously produced the musical version of \u003cem\u003eReal Women Have Curves\u003c\/em\u003e in Los Angeles in 2009 and is involved in the current development of \u003cem\u003eReal Women Have Curves\u003c\/em\u003e for 2015. In the fall of 2012 she co-produced the play \u003cem\u003eDetained in the Desert\u003c\/em\u003e at the Guadeloupe Theater in San Antonio. As of late, her Lifetime movie \u003cem\u003eThe Choking Game\u003c\/em\u003e based on the YA book by Diana Lopez aired in summer 2014. She is also featured in the book \u003cem\u003eWrite Now!\u003c\/em\u003e from Penguin\/Tarcher. She was also recently a speaker at the International Women’s Writer Festival in Italy in 2014.\u003c\/p\u003e\r\n\u003cp\u003eElizabeth Lopez attended Vassar College, majoring in English Literature. She started her Hollywood career as a story analyst for talent managers and production companies, including Vincent Cirrincione \u0026amp; Associates and The Little Company. As VP of Literary Development at Marilyn Atlas Management, she has been managing writing talent. She was a screenwriting fellow of the L.A. 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